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You are so beautiful

I'll etch you into my skin

a permanent portriat of pain

a constant reminder of my misery

smile

do you like it

stare at it with your blank eyes

all this blood was quite a surprise

mine drips on yours

a mixture of admiration and hate

I touch your face lightly

leaving my mark in red

look at me

see what you did

this is all your fault

youre dead

but your heart is still beating the same

youre as warm as you always were

can you help me understand

was he all that great

was I all that bad

I saw you smile and just had to take it

now youre all mine

you cant run away this time

 

 

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Oh god, pure, perfectly justified obsession! This poem had a dangerous dark edge to it! Amazing! Keep writing

-Wela

like Blossom here i think this is quite an emotion you've created with your words. It reminds me of my poem "Hurt". Great twist in the poem. :)

[Blossom]

wow. that is beautiful!! the darkness of this is amazing but the feeling of love and possessiveness is fierce. you really must wish to monopolize some> ^_^.
overall great write.