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Mae the Umbrella

Mae the Umbrella

A Poem by Amelia Angel
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A poem I wrote for a photograph I took

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I went for a long walk today,

Down the grand old streets of Bombay.

I met a girl whose skirt did sway.

She said, "The rain is in delay."

I frowned at her in much dismay.

"I have named my umbrella, Mae."

"She likes basketball and ballet."

I did not understand this, Mae.

Though she seemed in no shape for play.

Her wire stuck out, her flap array.

For no rain did this Mae so pray.

© 2010 Amelia Angel


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I like the way this poem is written. It's written in a very educated manner. A lesser poet might have written "Mae prayed for no rain" but you took the poem to a different level by writing "For no rain did this Mae so pray." Nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2010
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Amelia Angel
Amelia Angel

Canada



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Heyyyy. So, I'm from Ontario, Canada. I'm 18... And enjoy writing stories and drawing...and photography. In fact I don't think I am that good at poetry at all. But I post random crap of it on here.. more..

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