"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


Author's Note

Einstein Noodle

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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read more



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This was written with superb imagination. It took me there (drew me in with a terrific first line)out of thought and landed me into a fanciful spirit. This poem was an absolute pleasure to read. It made smile. Brilliantly done.


Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

thank you lady sue ... so happy to meet you and getting to know you...right here at the Cafe' ;) Fri.. read more
Ladysue

2 Months Ago

Happy to meet you too and the review is to both of you. Truly brilliantly done..
Such a wonderfully expressed piece, took me for a lovely ride into fantasy land ;-]

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

Ms. Willow!! how happy i am you chose to read this one ... so glad you enjoyed the trip ... and i am.. read more
Oh this had Frieda all over it and you two were able to tangle an absolute masterpiece together. This was a myriad of life and a fairy tale all rolled into one. First a i read silently then I read it again with a voice and felt myself immerse into this opening my wind to a much fuller imagination. Loved it!

If you still have contact with Frieda pleas pass on a bug hello! She was fantastic on the Cafe and I do remember the tough time that drove her away. So very sad to see her go from here.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

thank you for taking time to read it through aloud as well as silently .. it can give one a more ful.. read more
Sorry, had to read and comment again! xD

Now that is a set of lines as I had come to expect from the "old" (metaphorical) Einstien Noodle. Obscure, yet in-your-face (head?) with no expectations, even when everything's said. Do we like it? But, of course! :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

you have blessed me day with a smile on me face my friend! thank you for reading "again" ..and comme.. read more
This poem alleviates me of my reason and lets me run free in the absurd. I want to be free of logic sometimes in a creative and playful way.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

ahahahaha ...thanks for the big smile on me face Cousin! :) yes .. reason can be such a bugger .. br.. read more
This is so amazing, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Months Ago

ahahahaha! you found Frieda and my colab! ... its a bit fanciful but we had great fun writing togeth.. read more
love this amazing piece..Einstein.. love the wording and imagery.. it’s just an awesome piece.
Kind regards Katrina

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

hi Katrina! pretty happy you found and enjoyed reading ... we had much fun in the collaboration ..th.. read more
Saw you reposted this and couldn't help myself, but to read it yet again. Still holds up after so long! Truly miss taking the spiraling trips through her creative headspace. The two of you have created truly a timeless piece. Just gorgeous... still.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

wow Travis!! what a treat to see you ... thank you for revisiting .. and yes .. we miss her .. one a.. read more
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

6 Months Ago

She is most certainly missed. In a weird way, I am thankful to have missed whatever issue drove her .. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks so much Travis .. back at ya!
Ah shrooms. A good poem, not sure if making this poem about tripping on shrooms was your intention; but I get those vibes so forgive me if I’m wrong. Shrooms are amazing things, and very good for creativity. Love love the poem. And shrooms haha. It’s sad to think someone pushed your friend away; that has happened to my friends on here as well. I almost, myself stopped writing here. Your note isn’t a reminder that we should work together as a community’s and drive out these trolls and mean profiles.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

6 Months Ago

Oh hahaha, I kinda always picture magic land with mushrooms now haha. Yes, it is a very spiritual th.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

you too Sarah! love your avatar by the way! :)
Sarah_Allen

6 Months Ago

Thank you haha
Lovely poem , Frieda gone like much of our life , lovely collaboration.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thanks Moon! yes ... times an eraser now and again isn't it :((( thanks so much for taking time and .. read more

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