Changes

        

"Changes"

apophonic harps ringing in my ears

I hit the wall of my obsessions

My senses of expression

we just can't hold hummingbirds                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

(Can We?)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

rivers run through  rocks

please don't sing for me     ~         a

plaintive keening

don't tell me  your art                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

(Show Me)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         

alterations to a tailor like a

calico kitten's soft      ~      rough

rouged tongue

don't write those things  for me                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

(i thought my prayers would get me closer)                                                                                                                                                                                                              

Sailor mendicant, hearing the sirens' wailing

finger tips          ~           map tats

trace story lines of mermaids           and

the deep               where fish creatures glow effervescent                                                                                                                                                                                         

(i wish i had not run so fast)                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

may i read your palm?

reel with me

in you          -         swirls

Divine intervention                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

(there is the Tunnel)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

peacocks fanned tail  extravagance

melding pot calamity

great love        the

living of the dead                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               

(There is the Light)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     

On Winds and clouds

lithe bodies bound

flights in fancy fandango

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7/21/20

E.

          

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ruth]

I always have a smile from reading your poetry E. Amazing depth once more and I wish the world could see such skill as yours, remarkable :) There is a process to this piece in my eyes...a layered building up to a completion of recognition, not just a wander through imagery but an actual process, very cleverly executed and articulated. Sometimes dreams and hopes are so fragile they tear along the jagged path on this journey called life but the living on and holding on to faith and acceptance make living a little easier sometimes...life is an art and your art glows brightly in bold metaphor, wonderful E :)

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much for your sensitive, intuitive reading of this .. and yes (you make me smile) believe it or not ..there is a process ;))))))) my "voice" is not for everyone, i know .. and that's ok ... if i get one .. just one review as yours .. my poetry is worth it ... i feel so gratified Ruth .. you "see me" ... so glad we met and can get to know one another ... right here at the Cafe'

[Ruth]

Same dear E and I mean every word, you are an amazing writer, have a lovely day :)

[sette]

it has been a worthwhile experience in reading your poems it speaks about life in itself the many angles the exciting moments and even the turbulent times can contribute to what is life really all about

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! i agree sette ... its a crazy, wonderful life if we let it be ... love your take on this one and thanks so much once again for taking time on me pages ... top o' the mahrnin' to ya lass!
E.

[lightsong]

One of your bests! a fine creative piece with your very own personal style, and I must think of "changes" as the changes we made to our poems too, not only the changes in life from birth, death to the rebirth, and how we must flow with them not to resist them, still I dive here into a world of creation and inspiration, as writers with our limitless imagination we can hold and catch a "hummingbird" even if in reality we can not, and that's exactly the message, You with your neat way brought it to us, that in our world of creation everything is possible, and that's why You are at the end flying with the hummingbirds,

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so the answer we maybe not able to catch them, but we CAN be them and fly with them. magnificent one Mr. E.

[Einstein Noodle]

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) my heart is all aflutter and giddy at your review .. i had to re-read it me self ... i am thinking did i say all that??? thanks so much Light as always .. we do have connection and this one has that connection in it for sure ... after all "(There is the Light)" :)))))))))))))
E.

[lightsong]

So very warmly welcome dear E💖 and for me you said them all :) love ya ✨💕✨

[Miss Sharon]

You blew me away with this one E I must re-read and ponder to receive a "second blessing" as it were! Thank you my friend. I always enjoy reading you. ~Sharon

[Einstein Noodle]

you are so kind. thank you for peeking around to find it Miss Sharon .. i am the one blessed .. with such generosity ... be well .. smile big and breath deep eh!? :)
E.

[wordman]

i got stuck in the 60`s e,, great words of wisdom my friend,we all change

[Einstein Noodle]

well ... i am a bit biased; but those were the best of days eh!? in all its chaos and troubles .. even Abbey Hoffman put a suit and tie on ;)
E.

[wordman]

yeap for us all

[andrew mitchell]

Yes we either move with the times or get left behind. Love David Bowie's song. A lovely write full of hidden gems to find.

[Einstein Noodle]

hey buddy! good to have your visits always ... thank you .. i am happy you found a thing or two in this that gemmed for you :) joy and contentment to you sir!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

You took me places with each stanza like sea mysteries, mermaids, a future told, light at the end of the tunnel or the while there is beauty fanned by a peacock

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ........................

[Ladysue]

ok E. I had to read this one a couple of times. Think I will be pondering this one for a while. Your writing is extraordinary and riveting filled with mounds of depth and boundless imagination. You have a wonderful gift. Not sure exactly what your poem is saying, but what a ride it took me on. The feel of movement through life. Somewhere on the spectrum between happiness and grief in times. Life an ever changing growth usually through hardship. And love and relationships are the dance that make it all worthwhile. It is an absolute pleasure to read your work. Makes me think, wonder, feel and smile too.

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much for your review and time spent reading and pondering .. i could not possibly ask for more from a reader ... you opened your mind and let the words take you .. and I love where it did ... thank you again for taking time .. and again .. such a fine pleasure it is getting to be ... to know you better ... right here at the Cafe' :)
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the complete poem.
"Sailor mendicant, hearing the sirens' wailing
finger tips ~ map tats
trace story lines of mermaids and
the deep where fish creatures glow effervescent "
The lines above were my favorite. The poem took me to better places and better thoughts my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Einstein Noodle]

love on ya brother! so humbled and gratified by your response to this poem .. and for pointing out those lines ... it helps a lot! thank you!
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Weeping willow]

Love this write as it takes into a waves of dream ;-] Wonderfully expressed.

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks again Willow ... glad you went with it ;) waves of dreams ... mmmmmmmm i like that .. love dreaming ... even the nightmares ;)
E.

[Sybil J.]

This is the first piece I've read, the title lured me in, as I'm going through some changes myself. I'm not good at this review stuff, but the layers of your poetry and the visuals/emotions captured my imagination and most inner sentiments. Looking forward to reading more of you.

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much Sybil! i am happy to meet you and will stop by your place soon to return the favor .. i appreciate knowing the things that spoke to you ... as well as constructive critique ... it is impossible to keep up with everyone here but we do our best and i do so by subscribing and checking it .. i do respond to RR as well ... and follow the live feed to read a few ... and i check on friends from time to time ... i am humbled and gratified you see the layers and that emotions were felt ... changes are important aren't they? .. i hope those you are going through will turn to bright spots of growth and serenity .. see you around ... right here at the Cafe' :)
E.

[emmajoy]

Changes come in so many guises' more than likely the virus is uppermost in peoples' mind at present. But Man has had to adapt to flood, plague, mystery, alchemy, hell and brimstone, etc in varying degrees over this planet's conspicuous lifetime. Yes? And yet, we survive because over time we'vee learned to accept or adapt to changes Plus, how to stand up to them even though that is part of many learning curves, too many perhaps.. but curves are bendable!

Your words always step off and away from the normal because you use gloves when writing: state without arrogance or pain - quite a rarity because so many peeps see the 'pen' as a tool. Thank you for drumming up thoughts and feelings at a time when we need our batteries wound up in order to survive! .

[Einstein Noodle]

dear Em! how true how true! human beings have gone through so many cataclysmic realities .. and survived .. and indeed thrived .. this is one more to add to the list says i! ;) i am humbled by your take on this and reaction ... we do as writers strive for genuine expression .. if it isn't .. most everyone can see it ... but we all are on that curve you speak of aren't we ... we don't always succeed ... but, i will tell you, ... the more i read of so many voices .. the more grounded and inspired i am ... right here at the Cafe' .. thank you so much for your thoughtful review and kind encouragement

[emmajoy]

Your combination of comfort and inspiration is exactly what's wanted! Wishing you smiles and safety in the week ahead, dear sir.