Sensuous

Sensuous

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

 
Loie Hollowell's Sensuous, Suggestive Paintings Provoke and Delight �
(image by Loie Hallowell)
Sensuous
cod .............salted, 
dried and packed in
wooded treasure boxes with 
sliding wood lids
I kept things in there once. 
Things like a pair of red dice,
my lucky rabbits foot ... the real one;
A couple baseball cards ... rubber bands, tacks
And     .......................             dreams of women.
Purring warm with the
fluidity of solids ..........with glow
conscious and alive in my hands 
hands cupped and spooning
a table for two
sun baked linen 
shaken to clothe flat quiet table
curves of warm cherry wood legs crevassed behind blue eyes
 minds ....and .... hands 
                                      exploring
so many forks for one meal
(I don't know what they're all for)
red cream 
smooth flow 
radiates radish sauces
star veins pink when opened
over smooth and rippling dimples
fitted as one
a table for two .........................sensuous.
09/2020
E.

© 2020 Einstein Noodle


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Einstein Noodle

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That you ever think to combine all these ideas & make it into a cohesive flow is your main magic. That you go from cod box to memories to sumptuous dinner . . . it's a zig-zag only a zany mind might make! I love the part when your poem goes from the routine particulars of what's in the box to the part where sensuality seeps into your reverie. I love that this poem conveys "sensuous" without making it about the physicality of the human form. Most people are turned on by such subtle extravagances (love the parenthetical fork comment) in memories! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

i am so tickled by your response Margie! i was a bit uncertain if what you felt as you read would co.. read more
barleygirl

8 Months Ago

My nearby fire is calm now, so I'm in a good space. But the rest of the west coast is unbelievable! .. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

we had a wee bit of rain yesterday and last night .. i think further East has some warnings out .. s.. read more



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You've created a rich, colourful and delicious feast, here, Mr. Noodle! You've not over-seasoned your phrases or accentuated the wooden boxes in a state of sensuous awareness, You inevitably write with fine phrasing.. and in this case, tastefully. ' a table for two - baked linen - shaken to clothe flat quiet table - curves of warm cherry wood legs - crevassed behind blue eyes - minds ....and ... '

and.. my kind of music!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

ohhhhhhhhhh Emmajoy! you brought tinglies to me face ... i am so happy for this review! glad you lik.. read more
emmajoy

7 Months Ago

Read again and still give it A+ .. inevitably find something special in your words.
My muse h.. read more
I do believe you are a magic man. That jazz, infused with your concoction of sensual play and passion has me melted down, like butter on toast! I could listen to this for days on end...thank you for the dance!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

ohhhhhhhhhhh dahlink Kelly Scheppers .. you once again grace the Cafe' and my pages .. so glad you a.. read more


Just popped back for a bit of poetic self indulgence Gene ... Yes sir.. tis still bril :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neville

7 Months Ago


I must spend more time elsewhere and doing other stuff too mate .. Doctors orders ... :)
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Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

are you making your eyeball weary?? better listen to that Doc sir! find your pace ... don't end up n.. read more
Neville

7 Months Ago


................aye aye sir
:)
great write. a smorgasbord of sentiment, a buffet of feelings and memories. you've certainly done the cooking and set the table. i take it that there was plenty of room in that box and at the table for those dreams of women. as i read i was reminded of the song by sinatra - luck be a lady tonight. this was a pleasantly different and i enjoyed it. the tiny fork is for the shrimp right? ... :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

ahahaha i suppose it is sir ... for the shrimp .. like i say ... i don't really know :)))))))))))))).. read more
What a wonderful treat. Keep the box handy and close, keep your date close in sensuality, keep the memories close to cherish at a moment's notice. Your poems delve into the precious things and memories and times gone into the psyche sir Einstein. .

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

yeah ... i do get all wrapped up in me nog sometimes ... ;) luv on ya brother!
thank you for .. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Months Ago

You are highly welcome and deserving. Peace, love and harmony.
what a magnificent thought flow via remembered objects and how you wove them into emotion what a grand juxtaposition mr Einstein

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

high praise coming form the Bunny ;) thanks always for you and your stuff and for visiting these pag.. read more
Thank you for sharing this treasure box of memories.
I like how they morph and take shape midway, as if the simple everyday things take shape into something beautiful and warm. Something real. Relived

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

as my nog gets older .. and simpler .. i relate to them more :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))).. read more
Ana Papaya

7 Months Ago

Welcome, E! :)
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Simply sliver of sumptuous:)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

so nice to have your visit Kira .. will stop by your place presently ... thank you for taking time a.. read more
You start with an ordinary box where you stored your little treasures to transporting us to a romatic and sensual scene where two have only eyes and hands for each other while dining out.

A feast of sensual phrases here which provide plenty of heat for the reader.

hands cupped and spooning

All those forks. One is more than enough and fingers are fine to feed tid bits :) You know I had my legs entwined with his underneath that table with its perfect linen.

Like a cat whose had the cream after reading you. Purring with content :))
Lovely work Mr E.

Chris




Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

awwwwwwwww dear Christine .. your comment gave me chills ... really did .. so happy you read this an.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

You are welcome. Have a lovely day Mr E. All good wishes from across the pond :)
Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

same to you Chris!
nothing as romantic
as a table for two
(actually wrote a short
haiku with that title once)

a menu of scrumptious
yum yum ideas blending
into a sensuous delight
with undertones that stoke
the imagination .and stir
the senses. o h did I
say I like this poem

y e a ..I do .lol

..nice write Mr.E



Posted 7 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Months Ago

thanks Ms Fran! so glad you enjoyed the scene ..love and peace forever eh!? :)))))))))))))))))))
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  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

you re so
vey welcome
dear friend;

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