The Boy

The Boy

A Poem by Silver~
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This is a poem I wrote awhile ago that I am pretty content with, it's sad at first but it ends up with a nice ending :)

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The Boy

Monday:
The boy runs home from school, 
doesn't want to be late
He sported a black eye today
 i wonder, what's his fate?

Tuesday:
The boy walks slowly from school,
hoping he shall miss
the monster waiting for him at home,
he tells no one of this.

Wednesday:
The boy walks home from school,
long sleeved shirts cover the mess
If i asked to see the bruises
I wonder if he'd say yes.

Thursday:
The boy is crying as he walks from school,
nobody believed his story, to his dismay
They say keep telling until someone does,
"I'd believe you" I want to say.

Friday:
The boy walks home with me from school,
I promised I'd never tell
The boy is rattled and nervous,
as he steps through the doors of his hell.

Saturday:
The boy tells me he's done,
and that nobody will care
I tell him that i need him,
and all he does is stare. 

Sunday: 
The boy calls me and tells me " I love you "
then the line goes dead
He hangs up just before I can say 
what's going through my head

Monday:
I walk from school alone, 
but at the hospital i caved
Room 235 is occupied 
with the boy whom I have saved.

© 2014 Silver~


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Author's Note

Silver~
please ignore the capital and lowercase "i" issue lol (^.^)

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When I started reading this, I honestly didn't expect much. But as the poem progressed it just became better and better. The story takes a turn when you suddenly mention the narrator in the story, and a descriptions becomes more of a story. I really liked it, but maybe you should look at verse 4. I don't know, the amount of words per. line just don't seem right. I know i will be reading more of yours!


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silver~

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it and I completely understand what you mean wh.. read more



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I love this poem it is so touching, all i can say is W..O..W! All of it just fits together like a puzzle being constructed.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silver~

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
When I started reading this, I honestly didn't expect much. But as the poem progressed it just became better and better. The story takes a turn when you suddenly mention the narrator in the story, and a descriptions becomes more of a story. I really liked it, but maybe you should look at verse 4. I don't know, the amount of words per. line just don't seem right. I know i will be reading more of yours!


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silver~

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it and I completely understand what you mean wh.. read more

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Added on October 28, 2014
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Silver~
Silver~

ellicott, MD



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