Hope

Well... This is the first poem of my life which i wrote a long time back.... know its not that good but Its my very first attempt at writing.....

When you feel depressed,

When you feel wretched,

When you feel you are not worth it,

When you feel yourself a burden,

It is I who stands by you no matter what!

I stand there till you are revived,

till you are ready to once again walk through the mazes of life,

till you are ready to fight,

to glide, slide and take a grand Flight!

I help you touch the skies,

realise your dreams and go for the hieghts!

You may sometimes feel alone,

but that does'nt mean I am gone!

Its just a phase,

dont worry it will pass and you will come out stronger and braver!

Who knows what future holds,

No one has the power to change one's past,

Its the present that has to be cherished,

revered, protected and prized!

Just dont let me get lost,

for when I am gone, You are gone!

No one can survive without me.......

Yes I am that little ray of HOPE, OPTIMISM AND FAITH!

Author's Note

Please look at it as my very first attempt at writting!

Reviews

[Inci]

No one has the power to change one's past,

Its the present that has to be cherished,

revered, protected and prized!

Just dont let me get lost,

for when I am gone, You are gone!

No one can survive without me.......

Yes I am that little ray of HOPE, OPTIMISM AND FAITH
beautiful lines and beautiful poem
very inspirational...
p.s. just edit heights spelling

[harman kour]

nice one! it has a wonderful msg... v must nvr feel depressed for v r nvr alone n there's always a glimmer of hope!

[Gary McDonald]

Love this, so beautiful and heartfelt. Great write!!