Our World

The world is sometimes a battle field,

amazing yet sad.

It makes you wonder whats the point,

why its sometimes bad.

 

The European countries that are,

constantly at war.

Their beauty overshines them,

when they open a new door.

 

Americans are interesting,

with technology around.

They seperate themselves with pride,

while bombing the muslim ground.

 

Africa is the central continent,

everyone at its aid.

They may not be a popular,

but they sure do get paid.

 

Asia is well known,

for the industries its made.

This beautiful natural continent,

Im sure will never fade.

 

The continent of Australia,

is stunning with its seas.

We never hear of bickering,

but they never aim to please.

 

The world can be a gentle place,

when the moon comes out at night.

And the sun shinning in the day,

with that bright beautiful light.

Reviews

[ABBY]

what an awesome poem. soooooo meaningful and deep. i loved it

[Angel Bird]

Wow! One senses your power as a writer in your lines.
This is a very strong poem with a clear message.
This place could be such a wonderful place if it weren't
for the greed of the human race destroying so much
of it in every aspect.

Fabulous piece. Kudos!

[Jessica Fox]

Such a wonderful poem and it has a great message too, another wonderful write.