The Other Me

The Other Me

A Poem by skyelight

Sally was a dancer,

Emma was "exotic",

Amy was a singer,

Megan was "erotic",

Daina was a girl,

Stacey was a boy,

Tanner liked 'em both,

and Zieda liked her toys.

 

What about me?

Maybe you are asking.

What a silly question...

 

I already told you about me.

© 2013 skyelight


Author's Note

skyelight
This was something I wrote in my psychology class. We ere learning about split-personality disorder and this randomly popped up in my head...

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Good. I got it right away. Nice twist on ending. I love that
Timb

Posted 8 Years Ago


skyelight

8 Years Ago

thanks glad ya liked it! :)
We all have different sides of ourselves, and sometimes these sides express themselves so eloquently and uniquely that they might as well be someone else.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

8 Years Ago

Amen to that :)
I liked the twist at the end.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

8 Years Ago

haha so did I ;)
But I promise I'm not this bonkers... weeeell maybe just a little sometimes :.. read more
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That's a lot of split personalities! But very fun to read and great rhythm! The end really gets you wondering!

Posted 8 Years Ago


skyelight

8 Years Ago

haha story of my life ;) jk glad you liked it!
Wow, this is reallly good:) It definately goes along with the split personality disorder and it sounds like a very troubled person to me... It's really good work though:) Great job:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elizabeth Porterfield

8 Years Ago

Your welcome, and I can see how that would happen:) I love it:)
skyelight

8 Years Ago

aww youre too sweet ;)
Elizabeth Porterfield

8 Years Ago

Hahaha, not all the time, but thanks:)
i love it :) it was amazing truly

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

8 Years Ago

aww thanks :) appreciate it!
Alina-Sofia

8 Years Ago

you welcome
this is really really awesome! I love the last line :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

8 Years Ago

:) thanks I thought it would give it a bit of a twist don't ya think?
Lucy Morningstar ♥

8 Years Ago

very much so, yes :)
interesting to read
so many you's are out today...Megan sounds like fun and Stacey the boy also
heck they all sound great
very creative
thank you for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

8 Years Ago

thanks:) I was hoping you'd like it!

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skyelight
skyelight

Glendale :), AZ



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I am 16 years old and I love to write/read(obviously). I play volleyball , soccer, and cheer. I like cooking, drawing, dancing, and just about anything adventure-like and artistic. My plans for the fu.. more..

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