Mistake

Mistake

People learn from their mistake and they move on in life.

I've made a mistake and stopped in life

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A

Beautiful

Mistake 

To

Love

You

 ❤

Reviews

[Silmara McGarry]

To LOVE it is never a mistake. The mistake is stop in life and not let go of someone that has moved on. Somewhere between the thoughts that are holding one in the past is a heart screaming, please let me love another that loves you back, so we both stop wasting time and walk in the road of the Bliss we so much deserve. But first, it has to accepted in the mind.
;-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I don't think i can answer anything on it. It's just very hard and complicated.

[Silmara McGarry]

I understand ;-)

[kitty]

No mistake bt a lesson learned! Experience makes tha man/woman.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Absolutely right!

[Gul]

Hey sky!!!
Great mistake you did in your life, to love someone. But, I think you are making one mistake "not to move on in your life, as other did"

Please try this one, this will be more beautiful than the last one.

Sorry!! but its just a suggestion.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Gul. I take your suggestion indeed this time life would surprise me rather.

[Lauren]

Life is made up many mistakes, that can either define who you are or shape you into someone new and better. I really love this, so very short, but so beautifully strong!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks LKB. Yes life is full of mistakes. Some are sweet ones some soar.

[SleeplessVolcano]

I like to read "mistake" as a "mis" take, like a movie director telling his cast to "take 2", "take 3" etc....it takes time to get things right, in life and in love.

It helps though to not make the same mistakes again.....that is just foolishness!


Great poetry!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks friend for the visit and review.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

You had spoken my heart here!
Yes..........A mistake to Love!

Lovely Piece
:)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes a mistake rather a sweet mistake to love someone :)