Green Date

Green Date

A Poem by Writer at last! Sky ~



Green Date

Put down your pen & listen to my heart,
I've hands full mud and you sprinkle water drops!

Get out of your dp & walk through this farms,
This green beautiful leaves and those flowers hanging with charm!

Get rid of share & stop tagging all,
The water flowing through river and those winds singing songs!

Shut down your gadgets & turn down your techie thoughts,
The teasing white moon and those twinkling bright stars, calling us my love and you still thinking on?
What you still thinking of?

© 2018 Writer at last! Sky ~


Author's Note

Writer at last! Sky ~
A date but not at "prom" only in the natures arm.

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What a sweet invitation,
How I would enjoy a green date,
Full of nature's joy and beauty,
-Amy

Posted 2 Days Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

2 Days Ago

Absolutely, very few understands and very rare gets the time to live a life like that in nature.
Amy R

2 Days Ago

yes dear, hope u get time to feel the beauty of it to. :)
Writer at last! Sky ~

2 Days Ago

Yes, I'll and hope you as well :)
Sky,
Just loved ur poems . Thank you so much for sharing . Its so beautifully written. It is simple and beautiful poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much Pradnya :)
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This is brilliant! Quite enjoyed It!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

It's too awesome to expience it my friend. Thanks :)
Sky you go with your name loving the nature as sky is. Sky is beautiful and marvelous and mysterious. This poem is like it only. It made me go in the imagination world.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Thanks Akash.
A beautiful tempting invitation to enjoy nature and nurture a soul. Sounds like a dream for people who are stuck in a concrete jungle.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Yes it is a dream for people who stuck in a concrete jungle friend. And unfortunately, we all are vi.. read more
Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

I wonder if it is possible!
Loved your poem about the beauty around us in general called earth's nature. And exactly about getting off your electronic gadgets and enjoy it more so. Than wasting time on gadgets.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Yes Dee, I feel people are more prone to use of gadgets then to live a real beautiful life. I feel, .. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Look forward to reading more from you.
Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Thanks friend :)
When nature calls we should obey. Look at the flowers feel the rain...nothing to lose everything to gain! This reader is taken right into an imaginary dream!. Dream I must as it takes me back in time Thank you!


Posted 5 Years Ago


kitty

5 Years Ago

Dont know why this was posted twice.
Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

...nothing to lose everything to gain! So true you said, nature is so serene and so calm. Always lov.. read more
kitty

5 Years Ago

My pleasure!

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Added on June 5, 2018
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