With & Without You

When I miss you, I write to you 🖤

With & Without You!

With you, my days smile

Without you, even my grey shades hide

With you, I live a life

Without you, I can't even survive

With you, I can write

Without you, the words seems to hide

With you, my black turns to red

Without you, the white doesn't seems so fresh

With or Without You!

I have learned to smile, all along the way through!

I have learned to smile, all along the way through!

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

a poignant piece so
deeply expressed
one can feel the pain
of heartbreak without
the presence of their love
beautifully penned Sky

nice work

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thank you very much Fran.

[Pradnya]

Sky,
Superbly written , nicely expressed.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thank you Pradnya. Glad you like it

[Chris Shaw]

I was drawn to your title. It reminded me of With or Without You which is a great song by U2. I very much enjoyed your lines. When you love someone deeply, what a difference they can make to your days. Their absence though, can cause physical pain. If you can smile through that, you are doing well.

Chris

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Oh Chris thanks for reading and pouring your beautiful message. Yes love really brings big changes in life...

[tiana hernandez]

I LOVE IT!Great poem you have here!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Tia glad you like it.

[Luna]

I like the sentiment of this. I've been with my other half for nearly 20 years, and I can't imagine a life without her. She's often the inspiration behind my writing as well, so I feel what you've expressed here.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes moon hard to express the feeling of missing someone special in your life. Glad it relates to you. Thanks for the review.

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

Beautiful sounds almost like a song.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Eyes :)
Love is like a song which has beats from the rhytm of your heart.

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

Yes very true, love constructs on it's own even in words converting into a special unique song.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Indeed, love is all divine...

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

Yes 🙂 it is