In Love

In Love

A Poem by Writer at last! Sky ~



In Love

You be the clouds
I'll be the rain

You be the lips
I'll be the smile

You be the eye's
I'll be the tears

You be the heart
I'll be the love

You be the moon
I'll be the shine

You be the story
I'll be the memory 

&

Lastly 

You be in me
I'll be no more. . .

© 2024 Writer at last! Sky ~


Author's Note

Writer at last! Sky ~
This is dedicated to Grandpa. My dearest Grandpa passed away when he has my hand in his hand at his last sigh. I still remember that moment very clearly. During the very last sigh my Grandpa looked at my Grandmother and he left his body turning into a beautiful soul. I will never forget that moment in my lifetime. Grandpa and Grandma I miss you both very very much . . .

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Those loves that have endure and stayed for years are extremely rare in this day and age and those kinds of deep loves are the ones we all long to find.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

1 Month Ago

I agree with you. Some lives and some relations in life are priceless.
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

There are those special people I our lives that shine brightly
What a beautiful tribute,
I can feel the emotions flowing as I read this piece.


Posted 1 Month Ago


Amy R

1 Month Ago

oh wow, same in dec, Christmas eve night to be specific, so it always lingers..
I'm hoping b.. read more
Writer at last! Sky ~

1 Month Ago

Life is strange. But we need to keep walking. Hope I'll see them as stars always!
Amy R

1 Month Ago

Yes, always, they are looking down at us all.
What beautiful love. Thank you for sharing a piece of you. It tugs at the heart strings.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

1 Month Ago

Thanks Seriana. Glad you enjoyed the read.
Beautiful tribute to your Grandpa. I too miss my grandparents and always will. Love is forever, death doesn't destroy it. It lives on inside of you. A touching read SKY.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

Yes Chris you are correct. The soul never dies it simply changes from one form to another. We all kn.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
That's so sad. When did your grandfather die I am so sorry it sucks losing people close to you. I wish you well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

It was in 2014 but people close to your heart never fades away from your memories. Thanks for your v.. read more
Your poem is a lovely tribute to your Grandad Sky. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Come come come with me with me on a journey through eternity to where love first began and the brotherhood of man then we’ll come back to our own time-land! One very
short first poem I wrote .. I felt this is a beautiful tribute to your Grandad Sky , heartwarming

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

Your poem is like wonderland Katrina :) Only angels knows that well...
Yes, I really miss Gra.. read more
Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

I know you do ! kudos
The love we see between relatives who have been married for so many years is special. When one is in the room, the other sees no one else. Beautifully written. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

Thanks *Lydi Yes, I was thankful to have been that through my Grandparents.
Where two become as one and true love has there begun...wonderful 🌹

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

That's the destiny for true lovers. Thanks for the visit into my world 🍁
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

4 Years Ago

Pleasure🌹
dearest Sky... a beautiful eulogy for Grandpa and Grandma...
I feel so many things about my Mother and Grandmother...
live on in me... because they were a part of me in so many ways.
My Father and my Grandpa had many traits that I appreciate and understand.
The greatest Gift is Poetry to share and become aware of Brotherhood of
Mankind. truly lovely poetry. Pat

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

Thanks Pat. Happy that you like it :)

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

208 Views
13 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 11, 2020
Last Updated on April 12, 2024

Author

Writer at last! Sky ~
Writer at last! Sky ~

About
"Style Matters, Personality Counts" That's how love should be. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Memories Memories

A Poem by Tate Morgan