lost

lost

A Poem by gothicchica
"

the last word is in romanian

"
                                                      
                                                     lost
                      lost empty cold blood pain hurt lust
                these are the things that my life consists of 
          no one can save me i fall head first and fail with life 
 i faint coated in sweat on the floor waking up alone alone alone the word echoes in my head on its own alone, lost
                    pierdut
        

© 2011 gothicchica


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gothicchica
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Many times I too have felt that pain
Tears filling hearts like rusted old rain
Cold and alone afraid to reach out

Written with soulful angst and grace...well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful sis just beautiful!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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it's like a fairy sat in your mouth - nice! so original - it ripples on my eyes!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I simply had to revisit this breathtaking ORIGINAL creative adjective filled gem! and leave a WOW!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Aahh, the repetition adds such strength and bone to this wonderous piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its romania not romany theres a slight diffrence look into it but thanks selene and i love culture thats why i know what that means

Posted 8 Years Ago


your poetich echoes down the well of soul~magikal dark fable~

pierdut~faded~ ROMANY!!! =)~ I speak minimal old world courtesy of grandmare~ =)~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good job, its very sad.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thanks solo2be

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well writtten.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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