Some say

Some say

A Poem by SlightlyOdd

Some say the world will end in fire and ice.
I say the only black is really gray.
and the the only end is when we truly speak.
Some say hell will raise to earth.
Who is to say otherwise.
Yet no one says earth will rise to to heaven.

And still
Who's to say what left when your gone.
the ones who are left behind i think.
But then again who's to say where they go.
Heaven or hell.

Or
Do either really exist
Do we fade in to nothing
Or Do we rise to something greater

Or is everything really anything at all
whats left...

Thank god for
Nothing

© 2012 SlightlyOdd


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Enjoyed this, the way the structure changes from a standard verse form at the start to single lines, that implied a kind of change of mood to very dramatic, so you did very well here... ( I did think about whether God in the last line should be in the upper case, but as you use it as a expression then you got it right !)

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I think god should always be "God" capitalize the g since it was an important prospect of God's name (:

This is a nice and well written piece though

100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing!
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

YOU're welcome ;D
This has some very interesting thoughts that I'm sure will keep me up thinking haha. But still a very good flow. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing.
someone once told me that i can't argue that the sky is not blue, it isn't green or purple, i felt like i could still argue it

and so way leads on to way

Posted 8 Years Ago


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SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing!
it is realy good

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

8 Years Ago

thanks for reading
Lovely write the eternal use tigon no answers really.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoyed this, the way the structure changes from a standard verse form at the start to single lines, that implied a kind of change of mood to very dramatic, so you did very well here... ( I did think about whether God in the last line should be in the upper case, but as you use it as a expression then you got it right !)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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