Forgive me

Forgive me

A Poem by SlightlyOdd

Take me out of this
I'm so sick of this
Lies try to cloud my eyes
Tell me if i am mistaken 
Forgive me if i am cruel but
I might not be able to forgive myself for this
But I'm not coming back this time
Because the monsters in your closet keep scaring me
If i stay i might just become one of the monsters
Until the needles are clear 
Until chains lay broken on the floor
i can't stay by you
I know i won't be able to forgive myself for this but
You're not good for me
I wont become a monster
Or chained like you
Everyone else will thank me for this because
Maybe you'll finally use the key
but
I'm not coming back this time
So I'll dry my eye's
but if you're out there
just know
I love you


© 2012 SlightlyOdd


Author's Note

SlightlyOdd
Sorry if it's too depressing

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sometimes reading a new poet is a little like looking in the mirror

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SlightlyOdd

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing!
No writing is ever to depressing. Beautifully written good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not depressing, real and very well told.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not too depressing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it. It'll make a good song

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's good! not depressing at all! i love stuff like that. ever read of mice and men? just like what you wrote, sometimes leaving someone is loving them

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 13, 2012
Last Updated on April 4, 2012
Tags: leaving, love, forgiveness

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