Silence Be To Thought, What Key Be To Lock

My blank stare refrains from

Bespeaking what charges the circuits

In my brain.

A lightless house is not always

An empty one.

Interrogate my eyes.

Hear their stories.

Learn how a closed mouth makes

For an open mind.

Open.

Open in the sense of observation.

Observation.

My key to comprehension.

My key to knowing what buttons

To push and which ones to leave

Untouched.

My key to uninhibited thought.

My key to enlightenment.

Reviews

[Beckie D]

I love this poem, I really do. There is something really exciting about this piece! There is so much feeling in this and there is also such a story to be told.
There seems to be some hidden wisdom in this poem, I especially like the line "A lightless house is not always an empty one."
I'm a huge fan of these little poems that really makes the reader think.
Great work!

[LizMarie]

Awesome N written very well put together :)

[Layla J Omorose]

I really like this poem. Very well written and thoroughly expressed. Amazing poem. Each line was my favorite line of the poem. Great job.

[Poetic Beauty]

Most people know me.for.having a great deal to.say but in times when I am quiet I am observing doing just.what you speak of. Finding.different buttons ones to push and ones to leave alone. You can fimd out a lot.when you stop and simply listen.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the many strong statements in the poem. My favorite one was.
"A lightless house is not always
An empty one."
No weakness in the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Jordan A. Wilson]

thanks a lot man.

[words of rooted design]

This is one of my absolute favorite reads so far! Quite the poet, touche.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

i'm glad you found it worth reading. thanks.

[Beck Louise]

wow, I love this. you word it so nicely!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

thank you

[Claire's-Girl]

I love this, especially the line, "Interrogate my eyes." Something about it strikes me. One of my new favorite poems with so much to think about.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

Thank you!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Excellent work. I love it.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

Thanks a lot!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

No problem!