Embrace It, Do It

Embrace It, Do It

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

Just think.

Let the feelings fill your soul

And enter your mind.

Let them riddle your body

With tingles and itches,

So much so that

You find yourself pacing

Before you can bring

Your hand to grab a pen.

Let them make it unbearable

For you to suffocate them

In your subconscious.

Allow thought, mind, nerves, 

And hand to work as one.


Give them The Gift.


Reunite old lovers,

Carbon and Wood.

Let their intimacy be shown

To the world.

Let your thoughts

Fuel their passion.

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson

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It's skillfully written and absolutly beautiful! It gets deep and that pulls your reader deeper into this feeling.
Very Inspiring.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting thoughts...

Good flow.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I guess 'them in your subconscious' should be 'then..'
clear words from the heart

Posted 9 Years Ago

Jordan A. Wilson

9 Years Ago

it's supposed to be 'them' but i just typed it one too many times. thanks for the heads up.
christine zapanta andes

9 Years Ago

your welcome
Beautifully written. I absolutely adore this.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Very nice piece. The only two issues I have are the double use of "Them" and the fact that you don't send me a read request. Your work is very good and enjoyable to read (unlike some of the other stuff I am asked to read).

Posted 9 Years Ago

Jordan A. Wilson

9 Years Ago

you don't get my requests? i send them to all the ppl i am friends with on here.

9 Years Ago

I don't seem to get them. ::shrug::
Embrace it, do it. I LOVE that title and I LOVE this poem, a great job Jordan.

Posted 9 Years Ago

AWESOME! I loved this.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like the way you put all these words in and on what place, it means that i like your style. This is descriptive, passionate, emotional, painful yet powerful.
I specially like the ending, it's the most magical and beautiful to me.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is great. I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on July 9, 2012
Last Updated on July 23, 2012
Tags: write, think, do


Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY

I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..


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