Chopped & Screwed

Chopped & Screwed

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

A crossroads.

A conundrum

Left side and right side.

Stay here getting screwed or go it alone being chopped?

Neither answer in sight.

I support the left, but I'm leaning towards the right.

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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* a crossroad
it started so plain and simple but when I got to the end i loved it! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

I said "crossroads" on purpose lol. But I appreciate the kind words. Thanks!
Neat. Clean. COncise. Last sentence really encompasses the crux of the piece perfectly. Nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow scary

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...and staggering down the middle.

"T's" in a path are pretty definitive once you turn... its the ditch directly in front that screws ya every time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good movement of words and thoughts. I like the open ending. Sometime we can't win either way we lean. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like it. Im not sure if this is a politcal alegory or if im just reading to much in to it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel political vibes here haha, great job! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Feels... political? Well that's the feeling I got at least. Has a great tone to it great job my friend!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this poem. The last line finished the poem off well and pulled it all together. I sensed a undercurrent of urgency and indecision with no clear answer in sight. Great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh wonderful, such is the dilema of change.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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