Revolution

Revolution

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

rancid rules rain down
eyes rolling from side to side
let the fools abide

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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Rules shouldn't be called rancid usually. I don't think this is an exception.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

It's a special set of rules that are seen as oxymoronic and as a contradiction lol. Just a metaphor .. read more
Laura Maidah

8 Years Ago

In context of a poem
The poem is short and to the point. I like the flow of words and thoughts in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


short but strong..well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow. Powerful stuff in such a small poem. Very well written. Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 9, 2012
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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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