Passing Glance

Passing Glance

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson
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Blue Rose Contest Entry

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Perfume smelling splendid
Hangs a lingering presence
In the air as she turns away,
Leaving my world in oblivion.
Purer than crystal glass,
Her eyes shine brighter
Than the sky.
Serene.
Two pools of amber
Trap me in merciful manner.

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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Leaving me oblivious.... Right? That's your intention? How does your world turn oblivious?



I like that the amber pools trap you in a manner. How is trapping merciful though?


Don't pick the right number of syllables that sounds like it fits in the right word and right spot. Pick the right word for its meaning, not because it seems like the right thing to say, ya know? Howya been? Haven't signed in a while.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Trapped in merciful manner. Someone who captivates you so much and being aware of it. Aware that the.. read more
Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

I've been good though! Just started school back up. What about you?
Awesome man! That's really good for the blue rose thing. Kudos!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

thanks mane. did you do it too?
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Not yet but I'm thinking about it. Trying to get an idea for all that stuff ya know
Beautiful man. " Two pools of amber, tramp me in a merciful manner" My line of the night, and i've read some damn good poetry tongith.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Hey thanks man. I appreciate it.
Simple but very powerful, great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Good description create vision of beauty and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

thanks
Simple but effective! Great Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

thank you
simple but beautiful ...well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Thank you kindly

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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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