Curious Case

Curious Case

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

A curious case I have become.
Void of passion, void of fun.
The forest, ripe with toil and zest,
Are where these illusions manifest.

Wandering 'round, eyes to the skies.
A fire moon suspended high.
Hark the herald, raven's song.
I wish my train would come along.

Ribbons running, racing fast.
Casting memories to my past.
Bright lights are in my head,
Burning hot until I'm dead.

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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A amazing poem. I like the flow of thoughts in the description. Many statements stood out in the poem.
"A curious case I have become.
Void of passion, void of fun."
You had me from the opening lines. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot man. I'm not going to lie, when the first stanza came to me I had to take a step back a.. read more



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a great poem of becoming burnt out. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Thanks man
A curious case I have become.
Void of passion, void of fun.
The forest, ripe with toil and zest,
Are where these illusions manifest.

- That stanza, and the rest of the piece is amazing. It actually is a great piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Thanks man, this one has become one of my favorites.
Wondeful rhyme and flow to this. Structure is also sound! Well done I enjoyed reading this piece

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm just glad the flow came to me the way it did. I got lucky on this one lol
A amazing poem. I like the flow of thoughts in the description. Many statements stood out in the poem.
"A curious case I have become.
Void of passion, void of fun."
You had me from the opening lines. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot man. I'm not going to lie, when the first stanza came to me I had to take a step back a.. read more
..what a great ending for a poem
=]

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Hey thanks!
christine zapanta andes

8 Years Ago

y.w. =]
great write ....very deep ...well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Thanks!

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Added on September 6, 2012
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Tags: void, empty, time, fatigued

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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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