No Drinks For Me Tonight

No Drinks For Me Tonight

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

...and these words,

possessed by the nefarious spirits of fermented elixir,

fell from the sky like acid rain.

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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Jordan A. Wilson
Feel free to review. I respect and appreciate criticism, positive or negative.

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The last time words fell from the sky I was in my early twenties and it had been about an hour and a half after letting six little off-white squares dissolve on my tongue, but I am being literal which I believe you are not.

I like this in the the sense that it is pretentious in the best way possible and it is short enough to pack a punch and not be overdone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The last time words fell from the sky I was in my early twenties and it had been about an hour and a half after letting six little off-white squares dissolve on my tongue, but I am being literal which I believe you are not.

I like this in the the sense that it is pretentious in the best way possible and it is short enough to pack a punch and not be overdone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful phonetically and thematically. Nice concept. Words like lighter fluid, shifting shape? You've inspired me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have pretty much the same to say as I did on your previous poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


One loves.

Posted 11 Years Ago


waaaaa i wish i had your vocabulary. *sniffle*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

11 Years Ago

Thesaurus helps me from time to time haha
I AM IN LOVE!!!
I wish so terribly badly that I had written this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"fell from the sky like acid rain" is a great analogy comparing the destructiveness of the two things. Powerful, and a great poem. I love the "..." of the beginning since it makes it seem like then end of a long tirade, putting the finality upon it. Great piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2012
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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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