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A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

What say you, my feline friend?
Yeah you over there with the toothy grin.
Hanging on the wall with your swinging tail,
Counting down the moments until I cease to exhale.

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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Jordan A. Wilson
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I hate those damn cat clocks, the eyes follow me everywhere. Good piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Me too man. Creepy at the very least. Thanks.
I like it and it's shortness.

Posted 8 Years Ago


No complaints. nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


uhm. it's short, obviously but to me it sounds like few sentences from a movie dialogue or something...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Laura Maidah

8 Years Ago

It's supposed to be short.
Laura Maidah

8 Years Ago

Just in case that was an issue for you.
so few words brought great imagery to my mind. amazingly done. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this. You're lucky that you can just write four lines, and it turn out amazing :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Sometimes it seems hit or miss lol. Thank you though :)
Cute and sly, yet eerie and a little disturbing. Wow. Something so unique and new in only four lines. Great piece. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


hmm, very interesting. I love it! No criticism at all except for this is a great work! I love the rhyming and the clear picture the reader can get of the scenario just by the little you've written here. Perfect.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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