Late Night Trip

Late Night Trip

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

Star blasts, light the sky

Embers hot, glowing dances

Smoke rises, dust settles

 

At the foot of the fire

Looking up

Psychedelic orchestra

A surreal midnight voyage

 

Not an ear to hear

No one there to share

A rollin’ stone I’ll remain

Tumblin’ without a care

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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Jordan A. Wilson
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i really like this. i love the imagery especially in the first stanza.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I can say only that this is a wonderful piece. I am sure if I sat on it for quite sometime I could find a negative, but I don't want to.

Posted 8 Years Ago


OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. BLOWS MY HEAD RIGHT OFF> OMGOMGOMGOMG.

Posted 8 Years Ago


vivid imagery. good vocabulary. LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!

great write!! :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful details and luscious imagery... Great piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2012
Last Updated on June 13, 2012
Tags: contemplation, companionship, loneliness

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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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