Hippie

Flowing waves move with the wind

And shake with every step.

Within her garden flowers make their home

And flourish with unbounded beauty.

Their pollen spews from their perch

And dances, creating an aura of gold.

 

Bees buzz for a reason.

Reviews

[Laura Maidah]

"Within her garden,(comma) flowers make...". Also, keep your punctuation consistent. I see this in modern poetry a lot where there is either punctuation, or no punctuation. You have only one period mark. A bit disorienting, but great poem, nonetheless. Nice work!

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like you're style my friend keep it up!