I'm Just A-Ramblin'

I'm Just A-Ramblin'

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

My heart cracks a little

When I think of me and you

Yet, I’d rather let it crack

Than be broken into two

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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I like it. I don't think this poem can be fully appreciated by the reader unless they have gone or are currently going through the situation you have written about. Then it really hits home. Simple, but beautiful in it's simplicity. A good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it. The depth of it can't be perceived by the number of words used... it should be perceived by the words not used. I like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Last line is a cheesy Cyrus cry for help. The title? Is it the real title? The crack repetition is out of character for you. Me no like. Sorry. You're a talent though. maybe I'll like your next one a bit more.

Posted 8 Years Ago


awwwww it's all heartbreaking and said. nice job!!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice its cool

Posted 8 Years Ago


awh, a sweet poem man. That is actually so catchy

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lovely thoughts from a ramble. Ever thought of adding a few more stanzas?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jordan A. Wilson

8 Years Ago

Not really just because most of the stuff I write comes to me in flashes and once the flash is over .. read more
Amelie

8 Years Ago

I've read it two more times prior this reply and I realized its better to end there. When I read it .. read more
Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

8 Years Ago

I'd have to agree..I don't always like a poem this short, but it's got the most power as is, I think.. read more
Aww. How cute. I love this poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem, you said it all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice man! With a few more stanzas it could be awesom! That's why I love when I ramble because good ideas always come! Keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 22, 2012
Last Updated on June 22, 2012
Tags: deception, wandering, missing you, moving on

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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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