The All Seeing 3rd Eye

 

The Absence of…

There they are.

Walking tall,

Faces toward the sky,

Noses in the air.

The absence of The All Seeing 3^rd Eye

Clogs not the brain,

But enforces the need for

Those of us with The Vision

To cater to their every need.

Asking how high to jump

And how fast to run.

Pitiful.

The Presence of…

Here we are.

Walking tall,

Faces toward the sky,

Noses in the air.

With the presence of The All Seeing 3^rd Eye

The world before us is

Broadcasted in Technicolor.

And it’s ours for the taking.

Our only burden is being so

Inconceivably intelligent that

It becomes an inconvenience to

The masses who can’t quite

Grasp the majesty of our being.

Pitiful.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Alrick]

hmm... one of the pieces that i can't quite place why i like it... just do... great piece! VERY nicely formatted, i love the two sections and how similar they are yet are supposed to be completely opposite just by the titles. very interesting... i like it.

[Rhea752]

great piece. the narrator of the poem is all high and mighty. i love the poem. keep writing

[w]

Very well written piece

[afra]

good job i enjoyed reading it

[kayla]

I enjoyed this(: Very well written and beautiful contrasts.

[Lindsay T]

Woww this is awesome! So beautiful and such a flawless gracefulness. Nice job.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome man. I love it. The comparison. Is Great.