A Day At The Mecca

A Day At The Mecca

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

At The Mecca

It’s not reckless

There’s no restless

For a quest let’s

Ride on the wind

Share a few grins

Venture through the sky

And get high

On the warm sunlight

Here there’s never night

Vibes are just right

When we’re together

I can’t see nothing better

I’ll write 1000 letters

So at The Mecca

I wish to never leave

I truly do believe

Right at the start

I healed a lonely heart

I hope to never part

From The Mecca

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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It is upbeat and I like the scattered rhyme. I think it has more impact if you end it at 'I healed a lonely heart'. There are different places called Mecca or The Mecca, and I don't know which you are writing about specifically, but it is symbolic of a place of pilgrimage. It seems fitting that you would heal a lonely heart on the way. :)

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Interesting. I like the rhythm, it flows

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awesome! Reminds me of (wierdly) putting on the Ritz by taco. I like you're writing style Keep on keeping on! Lol

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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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