The Colossus

The Colossus

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

The battle rages on.

My heart shaped arrows surf the doom ridden battlefield

Only to be disintegrated by the colossus known as Time.



A tyrant in his own right remains a force to be reckoned with.

His ghostly white aura fogs my field of view.


© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson

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I still love ya style man Keep on rocking!

Posted 8 Years Ago

The structure is aesthetically well-purposed. It really works in your favor. The tyrant is well captured. His aura is ghostly. We know that. Saying that is redundant. Opt out.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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2 Reviews
Added on June 26, 2012
Last Updated on June 26, 2012
Tags: time, courtship, warfare


Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY

I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..