The Second, Two Words

The Second, Two Words

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

Two Words

Gypsy eyes

Cold hands

Warm heart

Amber waves

Weak knees

Level head

Stay smart

 

Time runs, so fast

Eagle fly, so high

Closed mind, don’t last

Torrential rest, always die

 

Two words

Finger tips

Electric touch

Roger that

Quick tongue

Golden voice

Winning smile

Cool cat

 

Time runs, so fast

Eagle fly, so high

Closed mind, don’t last

Torrential rest, always die

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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Watched the video.
Enjoyed the lovely poem with the video.
Awesome work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is awesome. I adore the formatting of it, and love your distinct style placed all throughout this poem! great piece! i love the 2 word lines that happen to tell the same story in less words than most people would use!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This where I got the concept for this piece. Try saying it to the beat of this song and see how it flows.
http://youtu.be/tkFOBx6j0l8


Posted 8 Years Ago


I enjoyed this

Posted 8 Years Ago


very well done. keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nicely done

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Same comments as the last one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was perfectly written. Well played words with a cunning meaning. Thanks for the good read

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short. Static. Perfect. Cool cat? Nice. I actually say that all the time because I'm so freakin lame. The last stanza is my husband. We're in love. It's my way of saying I want to have its kids, it's so red hot great.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 29, 2012
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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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