Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Abbie
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don't really know...Just some random crap I wrote...

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Got a little bit crazy? I think it got more than that!
Over reacting? Who are you kidding? What you did, I will never forgive.
Off and on again, that is how our relationship went. Now, it is off, for good.
Don't act like you're sorry, I won't fall for that act!
Boy, you screwed up your life, the day that you cheated on me.
You should be ashamed of what you did, but your not. So this is the
End. Forevermore.

© 2012 Abbie


Author's Note

Abbie
I don't even know why I wrote this. well, please review anyways...

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loved it!!!!! the idea was awesome, and well executed too...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great style... To the point yet cute :) I liked it well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great job! Love the formmatting you used, beatiful emotional writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Only one error, 'don't act like your sorry' should be 'don't act like you're sorry' :)
Other than that, very good poem :) I love it, i can feel the anger.
Well done x

Posted 8 Years Ago


You did a good job capturing some of the feelings incited by a cheating partner [yes, I have been there, too]. On a grammatical note, when using "your" and "you're", determine whether you are using the word in its possessive sense [in which case it should read "your", as in "your life"] or as a contraction of "you are" ["you're", as in "you're not" and "you're sorry"]. A good check is to read "you are" in place of "your" or "you're" and see if it still makes sense [I think I can hear somebody scream "grammar nazi" already]. Overall, this was an interesting read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, this is wonderful! I hate when a guy cheats and thinks it's not the end of the world :/ I like how the word 'goodbye' is in bold and making the poem shine more:)




Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's a nice cute poem. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such a silly poem but simple and to the point, a rant but not a pointless one :)X

Posted 8 Years Ago


My mother ruined my life by cheating

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice haven't seen a poem like this in a while with the word downwards other than my poem screech anyway amazing

Posted 8 Years Ago



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