Not Forever

Not Forever

A Poem by Abbie
"

I may say goodbye, but it's not forever!

"
I have to go
we have to part
but don't worry
You're still in my heart

It's time to leave
for now, this is goodbye
lets try our best
not to cry

It will be alright
We'll soon be together
but until then, I promise
You will stay in my heart forever

© 2012 Abbie


Author's Note

Abbie
I know it's short, but whatever! :D oh, hey, please review! :D BTW, the poem has nothing to do with me, I won't be leaving writerscafe anytime soon! :)

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D'awwwwwww it so CAHHUTEE!(:
I love it wish I wrote it baha haha it's pretty

Posted 8 Years Ago


AWWWW! it was short and sweet, full of emotion with a beautiful rhyming scheme! perfect :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


this... I can relate with a situation I read about in a book called 'The Undomestic Goddess'. Lovely rhyme scheme... and beautiful content.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It reminds me of a summer love. I can relate so much to it. Beautifuly written! It flows perfectly.

There is a song that would be perfect for it, it's a French song "dernier baisers " by laurent voulzy. I think they match perfectly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is quite emotional and clear. Short and sweet, great write. Kudos to you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this, I think your shorter poems are better, more impact and less... not fluff, but like... cushioning. You know what I mean? Shorter poems are like a punch in the face, while the longer ones are more of a nudge.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short and sweet. "Simplicity is beauty," many people say. Well written indeed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the format! Pretty piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it!
It's short and sweet.
Very nice poem :))

Posted 8 Years Ago


I am glad your not leaving.! But at first it did sound like it lol very good:)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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