Three words.

Three words.

A Poem by rach

Three words painted my future,
then two more brought it crumbling down.

"Im Sorry."

© 2015 rach


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I loved this but....

you missed an apostrophe - sorry for being picky

Posted 4 Years Ago


The best poetry has the most meaning in the fewest words possible. My favourite thus far. Thank you :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


A Catholic priest that I know said to me ; Never apologise ; that`s the way you felt. Like the poem, fine job

Posted 4 Years Ago


Isn't that the truth,nice words...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Most pathetic words 'I'm sorry' do anything for f**k sake, say 'sorry' later.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hmm? Three? Two more? I'm slightly lost? I'm is a contraction of I am which you already know. 'I am sorry' is three words. What are the two others?

Posted 4 Years Ago


rach

4 Years Ago

'I love you" gave me a future and "Im sorry" took it away.
 Relic

4 Years Ago

Ah, I see.
wow...this is such wonderful poetry!



Posted 4 Years Ago



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