Invisible

Invisible

A Story by SM Davis

Angry eyebrows furrowed in the statement "I lost time!"  I listened and quietly whispered  "breathe, just breathe."  He walked away, and I stayed behind, waiting for that moment that he sees through the wall of all that seems real, the place where time stands still, and sees me.

© 2011 SM Davis


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Beautifully written. Short and sweet with a clear message.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great start ,plausible and drawing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I superbly simple, yet eloquent statement.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

anger is such a blinding force...it keeps one from seeing past their own faults...nice work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A single moment to bring back the time that was lost. Beautifully complete in and of itself.

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SM Davis
SM Davis

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