THE MAN I USED TO LOVE

THE MAN I USED TO LOVE

A Poem by Athina
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For those who got their ached because of love.

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Let the emotion rise,

Let the feelings lifted high,

As tears drops in my eyes

Because of the man I used to love

Whom I thought in me have devotion

But wrong,

This is only what I’ve thought

Seriously wrong,

And now I know I’m fool

For long years

You’re the only guy I dreamed

Try to control myself

Not to flirt to anyone

Nor neglected those who court on me

Because I admit

I have a great affection on you

That I want you to be my first boy

‘Cause you made me think

That you love me too

The way you look at me

That I thought you mesmerize at me

The way you act in front of me

Good actor

Clap, clap, clap for you

You tried to court me

And now I only know you have someone else

Now I regret

I used to say

That you’re the guy I’m madly in love with

I wasted my time on you

Those sleepless nights

That I used to think for you

All of those are wasted

Wasted for the guy like you

All of those are trash

A trash to burn or thrown away

A trash to be discarded

No good use

Before I end this poem

I want to ask this question

Why until now I’m still thinking of you

I have to forget you

But why can’t I

Why until now I’m still in love with you

Though I know

I am just a game for you

Why?

© 2012 Athina


Author's Note

Athina
feel the essence of being a broken-hearted

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Pax
the essense of a broken-heart is well evident...
I say we all learned from it, and understand it better than anybody else
for we survive through it...if we have not...then we will just hope for the
winds of change will patch up the hole in our heart...someone will come
to fill it again...
i like this write...
great write kabayan...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Pax
the essense of a broken-heart is well evident...
I say we all learned from it, and understand it better than anybody else
for we survive through it...if we have not...then we will just hope for the
winds of change will patch up the hole in our heart...someone will come
to fill it again...
i like this write...
great write kabayan...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good! Has lots of emotion and is very well-written! Keep it up!! 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Athina
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iloilo, 6, Philippines



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