..Likh Di..**Fate**

..Likh Di..**Fate**

A Poem by smilempsn
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Felt like writing it, so wrote it :)

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Yun Toh Likhne Wale Ne Har Kahani Likh Di,
Har Subah Ki Ek Kaali Raat Aani Likh Di..
Fursat Nahi Thi Uske Pass Mere Liye,
Toh Mere Naseeb Mein Har Baat Purani Likh Di..
Yun toh Lamha Guzar Jata hai Sabka,
Kyu Mere Lamhe Mein Kuch Baat Anjaani Likh Di..
Yu Toh Manzil Mil Hi Jaati Hai Logon Ki,
Kyu Mere Raste Pe Har Thokar Suhaani Likh Di..
Jaan Lete Likhne Se Phele Toh Rok Lete Usse,
Ki Mere Kismat Mein Hi Kyu Har Kisi K Dard Ki Kahani Likh Di..

© 2013 smilempsn


Author's Note

smilempsn
I know, most of writers here read & write(review) in English.. But as Hindi is my mother tongue, I write in hindi too....

Well for the people who don't understand Hindi, Its a poem about 'Story of my Fate when Written By God..'

Just like everything God wrote everyone's Story,
& He gave every morning a dawn..

He didn't had much time to spend on my fate,
So he wrote everything old in my Story...

Life moments are spend like everything else,
But why did he added some spice in my Story...

We get our destinations for the path we are traveling,
Then Y he add some beautiful stones in my path's Story...

I would have stopped him , If I knew he was writing my Story,
And asked him Y....... He added everyone's trouble in my life Story..

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I personally feel life is wonderful...we meet so many people...
slowly we got attracted towards someone..most of the time got breakups..
so that doesn't mean we should get sad...life goes on!!
we couldn't forget them...but never forget that they lose a precious diamond...
try to remain happy always...some people doesn't get proper food,clothes..
some people doesn't even has hands and legs ..they are still fighting with life and
trying to remain happy..
Keep writing!! nicely written piece :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

8 Years Ago

..hehe.. ThankU again ^-^
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

u r alwz welcum (^_^)
smilempsn

8 Years Ago

:)



Reviews

Dhundhte rahe hum alfaaz jo bayaan karein baat karein humari,
Par aapne yeh kahaani bas zubani likh di...

Bahot khoob 4th aur 6th line bahot hi khubdurat hain, bas yun hi likhte rahiye..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow ... this one is Tremendous ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

7 Years Ago

ThankU Gaurav ^-^
Well I must say smilempsn you have better sense of creating words in both Hindi and English. Loved you poetry :)

Keep smiling and sharing :)
Cheers!!
Singh :)



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

7 Years Ago

ThankU Singh ^-^
Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
Thank you for the translation. I enjoyed the story in the poem. No easy journey. Just the pleasure of the journey and path to be followed. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
I know in English it doesn't look like poem... But I tried to translate it wor.. read more
I personally feel life is wonderful...we meet so many people...
slowly we got attracted towards someone..most of the time got breakups..
so that doesn't mean we should get sad...life goes on!!
we couldn't forget them...but never forget that they lose a precious diamond...
try to remain happy always...some people doesn't get proper food,clothes..
some people doesn't even has hands and legs ..they are still fighting with life and
trying to remain happy..
Keep writing!! nicely written piece :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

8 Years Ago

..hehe.. ThankU again ^-^
Akshat♥

8 Years Ago

u r alwz welcum (^_^)
smilempsn

8 Years Ago

:)

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Added on May 3, 2013
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Tags: hindi, poem, love, path, destination, passion, likh, dukh, sad

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Delhi, India



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