..MeMoRy LaNeS..

..MeMoRy LaNeS..

A Poem by smilempsn
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I wrote this, once when I was traveling in Train.....from Mumbai to Delhi... Had a chat with friend...and thought what if I could CLOSE all the OLD MEMORY LANES..!!

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Getting in Traffic ?? Follow red light rule and Stop..!!

Wanna get out of communication ?? Switch off Mobile phone!!

Bored of reading Book ?? Close the book..!!


I wish there was an easy solution for
Stopping.... Switch Off and Closing Memory Lanes..!!


© 2013 smilempsn


Author's Note

smilempsn
well just random thoughts..... because sometimes its sad to remember GOOD OLD Days.... As we can't have them back, so whatz the use of keeping all those Memory that hurt....
hmm...

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good thoughts, very true too, old memories are wonderful but regretful that they cant come back, closing them off would be terrible though, lovely poem, :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

10 Years Ago

ThankU John.... well yesh, closing them is terrible though... but sometimes, its all we need to do t.. read more
John A Raju

10 Years Ago

yes perhaps, but the effort to shut them off is a painful endeavor
smilempsn

10 Years Ago

hmm..yesh I agree.....
This made me think of people not connecting anymore. Too much technology, not enough time given to creating memories. Turn off the phones, get off the internet, don't eat in front of the tv, spend some time and get to know your loved ones again!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

10 Years Ago

ThankU for the review Angi.. you just gave another direction to the piece... ^-^
I love your use of contrasts over here- they were effective in highlighting how hard it is to literally "shut off" our memories- most of our treasured ones are short-lived, and none of them can ever come back

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

10 Years Ago

ThankU so much Cascara...
yesh, its next to impossible to close...shut off those moments...
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

10 Years Ago

my pleasure
smilempsn

10 Years Ago

^-^

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Added on May 14, 2013
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Tags: memory, sad, traffic, light, lane, delhi

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smilempsn

Delhi, India



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