Bhi Toh Kaise **Hindi with Translation**

Its sometimes too difficult to tell someone the most important thing in Life..!!

Woh is kadar dur jaa kar baithe hai,
Ki pass jaye bhi toh kaise...

Chahte hai tod de duniya ki sab haadein,
Par is baat k liye unhe manaye bhi toh kaise..

Chu jaaye uske hath ko mera hath tammana hai meri,
Par yeh duriyaa mitayee bhi toh kaise...

Waqt ki kadar hai hume usliye umr se darte hai,
Pyar hai unse is baat ka yakeen unhe dilaye bhi toh kaise...

English Translation...

He is just sitting so far from where I am ,
that how can I even go to him..

I want to break all the limits of this world for him,
But how can I even make him ready for this..

I wish he holds my hand with love,
But how can I even remove his and mine distance..

I value life...time..and I am afraid of my age,
I love him so much But how can I even make him believe this..

Author's Note

It's difficult to tell someone that you like them, if they are too close to you..
We fear to loose then, if the feelings are not reciprocated...

just an attempt to cover those feelings :) :)

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

It is a precious piece of gem in Hindi, but I think you have simply translated it in English. I think I can suggest a better translation?

"He is sitting so far from here,
how could I go near him...?
I want to break all the limits of this world for him,
But how do I make him ready for this...?
I wish he holds my hand with love,
But how do I remove the distance between us...?
I value life...time..and I am afraid of my age,
I love him so much but how do I make him believe this...?

Nice read :)

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. yesh Shivam, I just tried to translate word to word in English..
ThankU for your translation, will read it properly and if possible will change mine.. ^-^

[Shivam Murari]

:-) My pleasure.

[Penny]

Bahot khoob. Kabhi kabhi koi shaqs duriyonn se hi pasand aata hai. Karib jane par, chahat kam bhi ho sakti hai. Aapko aapki ek tarfaa mohabbat mubarak ho, jo aapko shaayar banati h.

[Gaurav Walia]

Bahut khoob likha hai...Kya baat...well done :D

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU Gaurav :)

[Gaurav Walia]

SURE NO PROBLEM...

[smilempsn]

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[Akashi]

Everyone has a kind of poetry, and I especially like yours!

[smilempsn]

ThankU Akashi :)

[Akashi]

You're welcome!

[smilempsn]

:)

[Adri Moolman]

beautiful

[smilempsn]

ThankU Adri :)

[Rishabh Shaw]

wah janab aapke ishq ki adayigi to bhut khub hai..

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU Rishabh ^-^

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

what a lovely write :)

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU ^-^
It's ok, if you point out some mistakes too ^-^

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Hindi is nice but the English translation is not having any rhyming :)

i do understand the fact ,that how hard it is to translate any Hindi poem into English with rhyme

[smilempsn]

well I didn't wrote Hindi to English for rhyming...
I just wrote so that others (who read English) can understand what is written in Hindi ^-^

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

But still those who will only read English will find it disappointing.. ! But i liked both the versions :)

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. ThankU divyanshu ^-^