Drowned....

Drowned in feelings...

Too lazy to wake up..
Too lazy to walk around..

My head is up,
But my spirits are down..

I need a reason,
A reason not to frown...

People think I can fly,
But my feet, are still on the ground..

I am neither a princess,
Nor I want, one of that stupid crown...

My thoughts are useless,
And in them, I am fully drowned..

Author's Note

Wrote this today... When I am not in a mood of thinking..working..smiling..worrying.... In short in any state to do anything..!!
Bear with me, and my piece of sadness ...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

You have drowned us in your thoughts which are vwery relatable and which we feel those most days like doing nothing as if we just want to survive only due to tiresome or studying hard and long or even depression...A very good write...:)
I like the pic a lot too...:)

[smilempsn]

No depression Sami :)

ThankU for the visit and review Sami :)
I liked the pic too :)

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly ...You are welcome...:)

[smilempsn]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)............

[smilempsn]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

☺☺☺.........

[Relic]

Well described. It's natural to fall into such a state once in a while I think.

[smilempsn]

Yesh It happen Relic sometimes... But in my case, this is frequent ... ^-^

[Relic]

I'm sorry to hear that. I hope you can find peace.

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. Nothing to be sorry about, at times I feel peace in drowning too :D

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Melancholy, with an excellent flow. Well done!

[smilempsn]

ThankU Sharon for the kind visit and review :)

[DJ]

Nicely penned! This is very relatable, I drown in mine all the time. I enjoyed this, nice flow, nice theme and well written. Thank you.

[smilempsn]

ThankU Cairo for the visit and review :)

[Baby Ricochet]

True words spoken. Great poem.

[smilempsn]

Thanks a lot for the visit and review Ricochet :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Flummoxed, Smilempsn this one is truly annoying and disturbing with that picture... Drowned..
Helpless..
This poem made me cry..
Truly way in deep and very touchy... I'm very sad mood today and this one was just a perfect poem which will make me to write something on such topic.
Way touching and heartfelt.

Hugs & Kisses,
Singh :)

P.S: Keep smiling, and yes you are princess.. :) Which has a crown of smile always on your face :)
Stay happy :)

100/100

[smilempsn]

Oopsiee... Sorry to hear, that you are not in one of your best mood's.. Hope as the work finishes, and you go back home.. Seeing angel's face and be with your beloved wife... You will fell GREAT..!!

Don't take work so much serious :) :)

ThankU for the visit n review :)
The 'crown on my face' is just to show others that there is something good even in the worst situation :)
And sorry.. for making you cry, if I did with this piece.... No intentions of doing that :)

Chin Up...
Cheer Up..!! :) :) :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Now that my girl ( I mean friend).. You too keep smiling and don't get too much depressed and annoyed, God Bless you dearie :)
Stay Happy Always :)
Singh :)

[smilempsn]

:) :)

[TL Boehm]

My head is up,
But my spirits are down..

That line was especially resonant to me. I think it is where I live most days. Well penned .

[smilempsn]

ThankU for the visit and review Boehm :)

well mostly I too live in that state :)

[Akashi]

Very nicely written. Great job!

[smilempsn]

ThankU Akashi :)

[Akashi]

You are welcome. ;)