absence

absence

A Poem by jamykinns
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At night I sleep in an ice cold bed.
There is evil coming in the cracked window.
My soul feels pressure digging deep.
I cover up but still can't sleep.
The moon is bright shinning through my window.
A touch to my belly makes my body shiver.
Blood pumping vast in my heart.
Whispers echo this large room.
Who goes there.
Who creeps the darkness of my room.

© 2016 jamykinns


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Ooh. The suspense. I love it! Wonderful work! Keep it up.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Doesn't sound like anything you've ever wrote before. It's good, though. Reminds me of my wife, getting scared over nothing (typical female thing, I guess). I really like it. Definitely paints a picture for me.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jamykinns

3 Years Ago

It's about a demon who lurks in the shadow of a young girls room.

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Added on February 4, 2016
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Miami, OK



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