HE IS IN ME, I AM IN HIM

HE IS IN ME, I AM IN HIM

A Poem by JENY
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wrote for the cotest know yourself

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HE IS IN ME, I AM IN HIM

 

I am a child

Who wants to suck

The n*****s of creativity

That will never wean me off

 

I am an adolescent

Whose heaven is in fresh love

That blooms before desire and sex

That fires and shares thirst for pure love

 

I am a wife

With two ends of my candle of desire

Burning never in unison

One for my hubby other for my baby

 

I am a mother

My baby gave birth to my maternity

I am toddling with my baby

I listen to its lessons in his cries and smiles.

 

I am a specimen

In the hands of the creator

He will experiment with me..

Till I know him; learn to live in him..

 

Till that knowledge dawns in me

I will have to play many roles

In this spiraling virtual drama of my life…

Scripted by him, especially for me...

 

Once my cells assimilate Him

I am boundless, like this sky.

My voyage to dissolve in Him

Will never be futile…

As, He is in me, I am in Him.

 

© 2010 JENY


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This is of the most interesting and honest interpretations of ones beliefs or mortality, I've ever observed - how very beautiful & raw... thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago


You know what...you are officially one of my favorite writers....this poem is amazing...I love what it speaks about!! The cycle of life and coming to know yourself!! I loved how you bonded these things together and then near the end you speak of something based on more than understanding...which takes us even deeper into the matter!! Again I loved it!!♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great I hope You win the Contest with this one :) good luck

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really poignant poerm love :)
Life never pans out the way we think!
Awesome portrayal of that sweety :)
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is remarkably controlled, innovative and timeless; A striking read. Wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really like this wonderfully done

Posted 13 Years Ago


Usually I would not drop a comment on a type of poem that pushes me towards the "higher Power" aspect due to me being half unconscious, but today let's get creative here.

I liked it, I read into it that you are partial to believing in GOD and for me, as I am Agnostic and believe in the fact that SOMEONE or SOMETHING is watching over us.....plus a bit of all religions that this was so very heartfelt and I did enjoy reading it, so thank you for putting this in such a manner that didn't make me [personally] feel like I am "bad" for my beliefs, you had this well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is intellectually beautiful! It gave me goose flesh, a wisdom that is worth taking. You have described the true human spirit in its sublime state. the true essence of a woman, perfect choice of word.

A poem that is my favorite among my favorites
A poem the best among the best!

Thanks for sharing sweetie!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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