EMOTIONS

EMOTIONS

A Poem by JENY
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a poem

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EMOTIONS

 

Jumping out of bed

One girl cried

You see I am born

 

Ceaseless wailings of a soul in pain

Ready to embrace a tomb

Yearned for a death yet to come

 

How it comes and goes

Amidst this busy life

Pondering over this mystery

Perennial happiness where are you?

Yonder here yonder there..

 

Something is pricking.

Attired in white pal,

Death prowls around my house

 

Shining like twilight

How naughty is this shyness

You look, on the face of bride

Never seen such a candid joy

Ever thought of cause of her smile?

Something enigmatic it may seem

Sure..she is thinking about nakedness

 

Lazy it may appear

One day, it may be calm, but

Very much ebullient it is..

Ever dared to touch it? my friend?

© 2011 JENY


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THis is worth an applaud.... awesome...

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love the idea!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really don't like these types of poems because they always seem forced, but you have always had a talent for them. This one tops them all though! I love the way that not only have you started each line to make several words, BUT the stanzas describe the word!! Truly amazing!! Great job!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Incredible. You have done the Acrostic style with a deft hand and so much feeling. This is a great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love acrostics, and you captured good emotions with aplomb. Good lines like "Ceaseless wailings of a soul in pain" and "Shining like twilight."

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very cool acrostic, JENY! Beautiful...

Posted 9 Years Ago


A very good poem. I like the set-up of the poem. The feeling of emotions are many we must feel in a life. No weakness in this poem. Just a beautiful and outstanding poem. Thank you.
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Posted 9 Years Ago


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nice idea...well executed..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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solid construction

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Kerala, Thrissur, India



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