NEVER

NEVER

A Poem by JENY
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a poem

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NEVER

 

Never touch

Where I never touched

A touch is enough

To break open the whole pain

 

Never kiss

Where I never kissed

A brush of lips is enough

To break open the whole passion

 

Never smile

When I never smiled

A smile is enough

To fan the fire of my longings..

 

Never smell

What I never smelled

A smell is enough

To wake up the animal in me

 

Never call

When I never called

Your voice is enough

To crumble the walls of my inhibitions

 

Never come

When I never came in front of you

A sight is enough

To break my mind into pieces

Pieces of unfulfilled hopes.

© 2011 JENY


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Oh wow! I really love this! I don't know if I'm right, but I feel this is about restrained love. Kinda like, don't give me a reason to love you. Love it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A clever poem exploring the aspects of never, with fine combinations like, "A brush of lips is enough/To break open the whole passion." The metaphor of pieces is excellent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem, jeny, filled with suppressed longing. Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A amazing poem my writer friend. I like the feel of a old desire and memories in the poem. A hint of regret and need I feel inside the strong words. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Sometime we must hold on to the disappointments. That is all we have left.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great write..!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so creative!
I loved the ending!
"To break my mind into pieces
Pieces of unfulfilled hopes."
This is absolutely wonderful :)
Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sadly beautiful, sometimes never is not forever..


Posted 12 Years Ago


Painful, and easy to read. Raw emotion and slight of hand with your wording, well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Like like like! there's nothing like good repetition in a poem:) thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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the repetition is strong..songlike..a strong sense of knowing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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