Immortal One

Immortal One

A Poem by Trouble Smurff

A secret

extending down

concealed beneath

each deliberation.

 

Disturbed nights

awakened days

hunger ignites passion craves.

 

One circumstance

yearning be

your immortal painful need

© 2008 Trouble Smurff


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i truely and honestly love this poem. It creates emotion and feelings. I abolutly love the rhyming scheme in it to. I also like the fact that its very simple yet very complex at the same exact time. And the powerful word choice is excelent. Very well job. Keep writing no matter what anyone tells you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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