Traces

Traces

A Poem by Oblivion

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Laces and traces

of beautiful places

and lovely people.

Beloved on the point

of an icy needle. 

Fragile fabric where

we pour our souls,

into a bowl that’s

really a sift for

surrender to

the need for

saying

good bye. 




© 2013 Oblivion


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I am delightfully sliding down from the top of ignorance to the bottom of deep wisdom when I read this poem! it flows amazingly smoothly and penetrates into my soul so gently! great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oblivion

11 Years Ago

Thank you Nona. Orange you going to put a picture up?
picture matches the words...lovely
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oblivion

11 Years Ago

Thank you Holly. :)
Beautiful picture, beautiful words .. a mix of metaphors here, perhaps how the poet's thoughts are juggling emotions. Unless my interpretation is wrong.

Not sure about the comma after 'soul's'. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oblivion

11 Years Ago

Thank you Emma, isn't life often all mixed up with all it's paradoxes and disappointments. Make me .. read more

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