Simple man

Simple man

A Poem by Oblivion



Where are the boundaries of a good man,

Who would define him,

refine him and tell him who to be.

I want to know and in that direction I’ll go

into such are rare endeavor

not clever but into simple.


© 2013 Oblivion


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Oblivion

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' such are rare endeavor - not clever but into simplicity. '

If i may shift the word 'simplicity' into 'simple' : at least we know a simple man has little guile, few pretensions and walks his own path rather than be someone else's puppet! Your words romp sedately and really open thought-doors.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oblivion

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm going to take your advice on that word change, thank you... read more
very thought provoking and deep and profound. such a short poem but full of so much. people must know their boundaries. well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oblivion

11 Years Ago

Thank you critic for reading and commenting.

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