House of dream........

Lights shed throw corners of my heart

When you smiled into my life

I smiled when strings of your guitar played song for me

Together we build up house of dreams

Painted it with red roses

It’s been awhile since you set it on fire

 

Still........

I walked inside with wreaked heart

 Where all windows of love were ash

Blooming flowers of memories were smashed

Walls of hope were collapsed

Roof of warmth were broken

And salty water of my eyes were leaking it

I was trying to collect me from that house

You were already gone

 

It was house of dreams

It was our home....

When I look at it.......

Now it seem like mere broken blurred memory

But still I can smell fresh paint

It still feels like you, still have your smell

New way is waiting for me now outside

New house I need to build for just “me”

I’ll find new socks which won’t leave me cold feet

On the floor of lost “us”

House of dreams.........

Trashed.

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

But still I can smell fresh paint

It still feels like you, still have your smell

New way is waiting for me now outside

New house I need to build for just “me”

I’ll find new socks which won’t leave me cold feet

On the floor of lost “us”

House of dreams.........

Trashed.



Pretty wonderful. Fully enjoyed.
Antonio :)

[Snehal Ahire]

Thanks abhijit.

Nice work ... the last stanza is my favorite here . Good Imagery .
There are spelling mistakes that need to be corrected . part from that ..
Good Work !!