Never Again

This is a love song which I wrote a few years back. I am always happy to read it and relive the strong need I had for perfection.

As the sun slowly sets in these darkest nights
I seek for the truth and not your petty lies.
For you can hurt me the way no one can,
And if you do so, darling, take my hand

But don't leave, not ever, and not come back...
Stay until it's over - your punishment.

And if you really love me you won't live to see
Me to suffer, to cry in this misery
Again!

No! Never! Please, do not
Repeat this ever!
You are all I've got
In this world...

Your eyes have told me what your lips have held.
Every muscle in your body confessedly dwelled.
Caught up in a conflict between heart and mind:
Is there something you've concealed that I need to find?

Should I ask again after you've replied?
I have never done that 'cause you've never lied...

And how obviously your eyes look at mine.
Like they're telling the truth between your lies
Tonight!

Never, ever lie to me!
Please, do not put me
In this misery.
I am yours...

Tears that I shed imply much of my pain.
They flow down my weeping face so fast.
I cry, I moan, I am a disgrace! How long will I last?
I want to stop it but the tears sustain.

To look at your eyes hurts me even more.
It's like you cry and I somehow roar...

I don't even think, I cry from my soul.
Every beat of my heart hurts me more and more;
I'm not whole...

Now I ask: Please, do not
Repeat this ever!
You are all I've got
In this world...

Author's Note

Hope you like the spacing, this is written as lyrics for a song so it has a certain beat to it.

Reviews

[Panda]

:O this is so doomy and catchy! Haha! Its superb :) Some words could have been replaced to add more meaning and feeling to the sentence. But then again there is so much feeling brewing inside this concoction of emotions already :) Its an amazing piece of work. Sadly I wasn't able to put a beat with it but I could tell if it was sung I would be nodding my head to the words that seem to stay in my mind.

[soady]

I am really glad you got to feel the song. As for the words, I would like to hear your suggestions, but I do not tend to use some extravagant words that I do not know for myself... No long and Shakespeare like sentences. :) Thanks for the feedback, it really means a lot!