Undeniable

Just a little something for a someone :)

Coating my ears with your seductive words
Flirting constantly with my emotions
Coaxing and tempting
How easy I fall prey to you.

The very aroma in which you carry
Decreases my brain cell count
Dulls the senses
Or maybe just the common sense.

Your smirking smile
Can melt a cold girl's heart
Torch the ice that encompasses it
And vulnerablize her soul.

Deliciously addictive your eyes are
One wink has you hooked
Each glance has you running back
Just wanting more and more.

Wrapped around your finger
Had my heart tied in knots
Just one dose of you
And I was a goner.

Author's Note

Please review!!

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

The first green grass of spring will melt the coolest body ,Now a heart, those have weight of their own...

[KAOlmsted]

Oh man...I know him so well ;-) This is exceptional...

[C.C. Marx]

Amen to that, thanks for the review!

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure...

[Sami Khalil]

"The very aroma in which you carry
Decreases my brain cell count
Dulls the senses
Or maybe just the common sense.

Your smirking smile
Can melt a cold girl's heart
Torch the ice that encompasses it
And vulnerablize her soul. "
That is some good poetry...Thank you for sharing...:)

[C.C. Marx]

Thank you for reviewing!! :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Lover Of Words]

This is mind blowing awesome :)

[C.C. Marx]

Aww thanks girl :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome girl

[Kanishk Upadhyaya]

The imagination has traveled miles with someone and I guess you are enjoying the journey. Nice one...!!!

[C.C. Marx]

I dunno if enjoying is the right word we will see how it goes thanks for the review

[Kanishk Upadhyaya]

Hmmmm, well in that case I would say, I enjoy the painful absence of someone special and so I write. :-|

[C.C. Marx]

We all have our muses

[Sam Gregory]

Many can relate to ur words, nice work :)

[C.C. Marx]

In a way, that's kinda not a good thing of you know what I meAn but thanks for the review

[Sam Gregory]

I think its great to be able to relate to situations, even if they're bad ones. It all builds understanding and if it will make poets better poets.

[C.C. Marx]

Good point no Witty comments for that

[Sam Gregory]

*Nods head* lol

[redflutterby]

*sigh*.....i've met a few men like this. Fantastic poem...I love it!!

[C.C. Marx]

Sighing is right, those silly men just have to be all darn attractive and stuff, it's really not fair ;) thanks for stopping by amiga

[redflutterby]

I know...the nerve of them!! I'll be stopping by frequently!! ;-)

[C.C. Marx]

I mean who do they think they are? Haha well at least we have some good news tonight!! Yay C.C. will have visitors in the asylum ;)

[redflutterby]

thought i recognized you...must have been the same nut house!! ha!!

[C.C. Marx]

What? Pshh if course not i was completely joking....shoot I knew i shouldn't have mentioned the asylum, now people are gonna think I'm crazy...oh wait your still here please forget the conversation that just happened with myself, nothing to see here

[redflutterby]

Your secrets safe with me....and all writers are a little nutty. I talk to myself all the time!! Lol...

[C.C. Marx]

I mean who else will talk to you when your alone? I mean there's always Siri but she said we should just remain friends, acquaintances really, it's quite sad when you've been rejected by a piece of metal

[redflutterby]

Ahhhh....darn technology!!

[C.C. Marx]

Just as fooked up as those irresistible men...look at me I'm starting to speak like Frieda now!

[redflutterby]

Yes she was just saying how im now using fooking!!! Love Frieda!!

[C.C. Marx]

Goodness me that lady is starting a trend, don't be surprised if someday on twitter you see #fookedup or #fookit because girl, it's sweeping the nation, and it's not officially sweeping until its become a hash tag ;)

[redflutterby]

Fooking exactly!!!

[C.C. Marx]

Fookalicious :p

[Amanda]

This was really great, nice job :D

[C.C. Marx]

Thank you so much for reviewing :)

[Aly]

LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[C.C. Marx]

Thanks aly!! Remember who helped me get it on here :)

[Aly]

:) :) :) mm-hmm

[Frieda P]

Ahhh, somebody's been enticed. Nice one...lots of great lines.

'vulnerablize her soul'

Ha, is that even a word, it works nonetheless! Kudos.

[C.C. Marx]

Probably not though, it was midnight and it sounded good to me. Entinced is a good word for it, thanks for reviewing frieda!!!

[Frieda P]

Ha I liked it....we're allowed to take poetic license once in a while, especially if it works! My pleasure...